An Inspiration

Joining in writing class for several weeks has made me to be a good author. All of paragraph that I read and all of the correction that given by my friends have improved my writing. On this week, I have to write two paragraphs. The first was process analyze paragraph and the second was definition. For the first paragraph, I reviewed Dina’s paragraph. It told about how to make a “ tahu isi “. Her paragraph is a good paragraph because the topic and the topic sentence are clear. It contain the materials of “tahu isi “, the steps and the conclusion of her paragraph. For definition paragraph I reviewed Putri’s paragraph. Her paragraph told about De Javu. It explain about what is De Javu. It is a good paragraph even there was a little mistake of grammatical.

 I realized that made a paragraph need inspiration and more knowledge about the topic that we want to read. that’s my problem, I need more time to get an inspiration for my writing and It make me difficult to decide the topic of paragraph that I want to write.

The harder we try, The more we get

Hello my friends..  I’m here again in my wonderful blog. Now I would like to tell you about my writing class for this week. In this week, I have three meetings of writing class. Two meetings are as usual and one meeting is a replacement from the previous week and it was held on Monday by discussing cause and effect paragraph. In this meeting I corrected Ima’s paragraph. Her paragraph told about the cause and effect of stay up. It is a good paragraph because the topic and topic sentence are clear even there was a little mistakes for grammatical. The effects in this paragraph is so many than the cause.

The next meeting was on Wednesday. as like usual, every Wednesday we have presentation and for this Wednesday I was a presenter with lilis and tryas. the first presenter was tryas. the topic of her paragraph was homework. Actually she explained about explanation paragraph but we though it was a persuasive paragraph because from her paragraph we could know that the purpose of that paragraph is to persuade someone to do their homework.  The second presenter was lilis. She explained 2 paragraph. One of her paragraph was seem like a sentence because all of this sentences in her second paragraph is separated by comma. So, she modified it and made this sentences to be a good paragraph. The last was me. I presented about classification paragraph, there was nothing to be debated because my paragraph was clear. It told about the classification of Rock music.

On Friday, we did worksheet by the theme “ classification “. In this meeting, I corrected lili’s paragraph. Her writing told about the classification of student. It was a good paragraph because the topic and topic sentence were clear even there was a little grammatical error.  In this meeting I got a good lesson.

Ok.. that’s all my activities in my writing class for this week. Even it was a hard week for me, I felt happy to study in my writing class. One sentence for you. “the harder we try, the more we get”. 

Try to Speak …. ( Please!!! )

Last week, I had studied about cause and effect paragraph in my writing class. Actually before I came in my class, I did not really understand about cause and effect paragraph, but after reading the example of cause and effect paragraph from my friends and discussing it with my friends, finally I really understand it. Actually Last Friday my class was not fun as usual, but I got a lesson from my class at that day. I could understand that if we were in a class we had to be able to share our opinion, we might brave to ask something that we had not understand yet and we might brave to say our opinion Because from asking we can understand about everything that we have not known before. Oke.. that’s all my opinion for our class last 2 Friday… what’s your opinion guys… give me your comments…  thank you..