The harder we try, The more we get

Hello my friends..  I’m here again in my wonderful blog. Now I would like to tell you about my writing class for this week. In this week, I have three meetings of writing class. Two meetings are as usual and one meeting is a replacement from the previous week and it was held on Monday by discussing cause and effect paragraph. In this meeting I corrected Ima’s paragraph. Her paragraph told about the cause and effect of stay up. It is a good paragraph because the topic and topic sentence are clear even there was a little mistakes for grammatical. The effects in this paragraph is so many than the cause.

The next meeting was on Wednesday. as like usual, every Wednesday we have presentation and for this Wednesday I was a presenter with lilis and tryas. the first presenter was tryas. the topic of her paragraph was homework. Actually she explained about explanation paragraph but we though it was a persuasive paragraph because from her paragraph we could know that the purpose of that paragraph is to persuade someone to do their homework.  The second presenter was lilis. She explained 2 paragraph. One of her paragraph was seem like a sentence because all of this sentences in her second paragraph is separated by comma. So, she modified it and made this sentences to be a good paragraph. The last was me. I presented about classification paragraph, there was nothing to be debated because my paragraph was clear. It told about the classification of Rock music.

On Friday, we did worksheet by the theme “ classification “. In this meeting, I corrected lili’s paragraph. Her writing told about the classification of student. It was a good paragraph because the topic and topic sentence were clear even there was a little grammatical error.  In this meeting I got a good lesson.

Ok.. that’s all my activities in my writing class for this week. Even it was a hard week for me, I felt happy to study in my writing class. One sentence for you. “the harder we try, the more we get”.