Joining in writing class for several weeks has made me to be
a good author. All of paragraph that I read and all of the correction that
given by my friends have improved my writing. On this week, I have to write two
paragraphs. The first was process analyze paragraph and the second was
definition. For the first paragraph, I reviewed Dina’s paragraph. It told about
how to make a “ tahu isi “. Her paragraph is a good paragraph because the topic
and the topic sentence are clear. It contain the materials of “tahu isi “, the
steps and the conclusion of her paragraph. For definition paragraph I reviewed
Putri’s paragraph. Her paragraph told about De Javu. It explain about what is
De Javu. It is a good paragraph even there was a little mistake of grammatical.
I realized that made
a paragraph need inspiration and more knowledge about the topic that we want to
read. that’s my problem, I need more time to get an inspiration for my writing
and It make me difficult to decide the topic of paragraph that I want to write.
I think we also must know the characteristics of good paragraph if we want to make a good paragraph. We can learn the steps to make a good paragraph.
BalasHapusKeep spirit dear...
oke thank's ya.. :)
BalasHapus